In the holidays
I went to the swimming pools with my dad and my cousins.
My cousin rang up and asked us if we wanted
to go to the swimming pools and we said yes. I couldn't find my togs so we got my togs from my papas house. Then we had a swim and went home and my uncle came to my house and got drunk. I went to pre-school and had a sleep over. We had lots to eat and we played on the camera. Me and my friend Honua watched the Hannah Montana movie and the lilo and stitch movie. After that, we went to sleep. Then I went home and played with my sister. She was cleaning her room after she finished her room, she played with me. I felt happy to see my family.
By Faith
That is a fantastic recount of your holiday Faith, you are very clever to be able to write such a long story and you are only 6!!! Wow!
ReplyDeletewow that's a long story.By nick
ReplyDeletewoooaahhh !!
ReplyDeletedammn Faith i loved your story !
i reeellay like the part where you mentioned mee your sisster (WINNSEA) hehe ur story was very funny and i hope you continue writing more exciting stories about ur adventures ...